Penance

July 10, 2023
In the uneven latest from Clark (Boy Parts), a group of high school girls murder their friend in a British seaside town on the eve of Brexit. The sordid events are related by Alex Z. Carelli, a once-principled journalist who is now writing salacious true crime. Bereaved by his daughter’s suicide, Carelli sets out to write a bestseller about the Joni Wilson case, and is unafraid to massage a fact or two in the process. He moves to the fictional town of Crow-on-Sea in North Yorkshire, where Joni’s murder took place, to interview various parties. First up is Joni’s mother, who describes how her daughter was bullied. The reader soon learns from Carelli’s interviews with friends of the killers that Joni became a vicious bully in her own right, and that most of them followed a similar trajectory. Early forms of social media play a significant role—one member of the group retreats into a Tumblr account devoted to her Glee fandom after she’s bullied by the others, while another joins an online subculture devoted to infamous school shooters. Clark’s depictions of Joni’s murder—the friends set her on fire after torturing her for hours—are not only unpleasant but a bit puerile. She convinces, though, in her depiction of teen cruelty. Clark captures the reader’s attention but gets mired in melodrama. Agent: Rachel Mann, Jo Urwin Literary Agency.